Notes on Nathan's sound homework

Track 1 & 2
Short clip of preacher

Track 3
David reading (The modernity of est lubricates est)
I’d like to see some of the photos from Catoosa here—sandpipers, river, etc.

Track 4
rechanneling of sexual mores

Track 5
similar to track 4—could be the same?

Track 6
Grant reading dig down deeper along with Mindy reading new text (“Deep long rolling”), rain in background.
I see how Nathan is drawing parallels between the two “deep” poems.

Track 7
sermon, Tulsa movie, rig sounds
Too much of the sermon??
marriage (reminds me of the “Interesting Facts you may already know”)

Track 8
“Dot dot dot”
Grant reading from “DavidNathanGrantMindy”. The long chords from Tulsita (taken from Tulsa movie I believe)
Mindy reading from “Deep long rolling”.
cellos?
Great use of sermon in this one, though I’d like to hear more of David’s voice reading our texts than repeats of the sermon stuff from Track 7
7:07-Indians singing Jesus song (more of this)
7:30-David reading “The modernity of est lubricates”—I think we could use other texts rather than repeating


Notes:
I’d like to hear more of the “music” you were making when we were writing
I do think we need to read more of the poetry we’ve written
More oil derrick sounds?