Scene 4 final touches

I think I've figured out a way to end scene 4, and thus Tulsita as a whole, and I'm just making a note of it here. Let me know what you think:

The sounds at the end of this segment are very subtle, so I thought I would have a few texts (ones that you sent me) accumulate in a faded, barely legible form. These words would slowly fade leaving the page blank as the sounds eerily wind down.